The mountain is holding out
for news from the sea
of the raid on the redoubt.
The plain won’t level with me
for news from the sea
is harder and harder to find.
The plain won’t level with me
now it’s nonaligned
and harder and harder to find.
The forest won’t fill me in
now it, too, is nonaligned
and its patience wearing thin.
The forest won’t fill me in
or the lake confess
to its patience wearing thin.
I’d no more try to guess
why the lake might confess
to a regard for its own sheen,
no more try to guess
why the river won’t come clean
on its regard for its own sheen
than why you and I’ve faced off across a ditch.
For the river not coming clean
is only one of the issues on which
you and I’ve faced off across a ditch
and the raid on the redoubt
only one of the issues on which
the mountain is holding out.
“The Mountain Is Holding Out” is excerpted from Horse Latitudes, by Paul Muldoon. Copyright © 2006 by Paul Muldoon. Used by permission of Farrar, Straus and Giroux, LLC and Faber and Faber, Ltd. All rights reserved.
It is what it is, the popping underfoot of the Bubble Wrap
in which Asher’s new toy came,
popping like bladder wrack on the foreshore
of a country toward which I’ve been rowing
for fifty years, my peeping from behind a tamarind
at the peeping ox and ass, the flyer for a pantomime,
the inlaid cigarette box, the shamrock-painted jug,
the New Testament bound in red leather
lying open, Lordie, on her lap
while I mull over the rules of this imperspicuous game
that seems to be missing on piece, if not more.
Her voice at the gridiron coming and going
as if snatched by a sea wind.
My mother. Shipping out for good. For good this time.
The game. The plaything spread on the rug.
The fifty years I’ve spent trying to put it together.
“It Is What It Is” is excerpted from Horse Latitudes, by Paul Muldoon. Copyright © 2006 by Paul Muldoon. Used by permission of Farrar, Straus and Giroux, LLC. All rights reserved.
"Hi, I'm Paul Muldoon and I want to thank you for sending in your questions to Borders Open-Door Poetry. We have a question here from Elizabeth F.: 'The more I change a poem the better it reads to me, so my editing process never ends. How do you know when a poem is finished and editing should stop?' she inquires.
Well, that of course is one of the big questions, perhaps the biggest one. There's one that comes before it though, and I don't want this to sound too silly. The first question is, 'where do we begin the poem?' What I like to think is that we try to begin the poem whether it sounds like an ad for a detergent or a washing powder. We try to begin the poem where you might have expected it to end. We try to begin in a place where one is really going into territory that is unexpected. So we try to begin with an engaging idea . We try to continue in an engaging mode, of course. And we try to end with some sense of resolution. Not necessarily with fireworks going off but there has to be a sense that we have come out of something; that there's been a reason for us being in there in the first place. And there's a sense, I suppose, that we've come out through a window or we hear a door shut, however quietly, behind us. Sometimes the door slams; sometimes it just creaks closed.
But to know, to know when the poem's finished as it were, I think has to do with our having a sense as the first reader of the poem, that something has happened to us; that we've seen something, that we've experienced something new, that we've had a revelation. Emily Dickinson, of course, had this idea that, at end of a poem, coming out of a poem, one should have a sense that the top of one's head has been taken off. Certainly at least, she felt, that the back of the hairs should be standing on the back of one's head. So a physical sensation often accompanies that sense that the poem is finished. We have a visceral sense that something has happened to us and that's often an indicator of something really really major having happened. The hair standing on the back of one's head doesn't necessarily come to us with every poem, alas, but certainly to come out with a sense that something has changed, including ourselves."
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